Brainstorming a Book

by | Jan 30, 2014 | Author Posts, Discussions on the Craft, Writing Life Vault


I read this blog post (originally posted on Susan Kaye Quinn’s blog0 just before I began working out the plot for my upcoming scifi novel. It helped me plot it out in just half an hour. No joke. A few things about this post:
  • It’s awesome.
  • It’s easy peasy.
  • It’s fun.
You want to write a novel? Read this first. That is all. ~Cheri

Need ideas for your book?

Unsure where your plotline is going next?

Feeling stuck?

 by Susan Kaye Quinn

I’ve had several writer-friends recently have troubles with getting stuck with the books. Each time, I was able to help them get going again with a straightforward brainstorming exercise I learned in Kat Fall’s class on screenwriting. I’m posting it in the hopes that it will help others as well.

This exercise needs a name… how about…

  • WHAT: Brainstorm Your Book (works whether the book is partially written or we’re starting from scratch)
  • WHO: You (and a friend – optional)
  • HOW LONG: 1/2 hour to one hour
  • RESULT: A rough outline of major turning points and scenes in your book

Okay, are you ready? I’m going to brainstorm a book right here and now, as I’m writing this post – to give you examples and to give you courage. You will do so much better than me, because you won’t be pulling stuff out of thin air. Then again, pulling stuff out of thin air (or more precisely, your subconscious) is exactly what this exercise is supposed to do.

Let’s begin.

STEP 1

Grab a friend – I really do recommend you have a friend walk you through this. Although I’ve done it on my own for two separate books, I think the guided, interactive brainstorming that comes with two people is very helpful. You could each be the guidance for the other! (Why does everything I do turn into a party?)

STEP 2

Open a Word doc… or use a pencil and paper. Either is good.

STEP 3

Write a Logline
Now… DON’T PANIC. I’m going to walk you through how to do this, and the result doesn’t have to be pretty. In fact, make it SLOPPY. This isn’t an actual logline, it’s just a way to get down in a few rambling sentences the basic premise of your book. If you’re not sure about your premise, this exercise will help you figure it out.

Your logline needs to contain:

  • Lead character and distinguishing attribute
  • Setting
  • What does your MC want?
  • Who or what stops them from getting what they want?
  • What is their challenge in this story?
(NOTE: if you have more than one POV character, you should repeat this exercise for each one)
I’m going to use a concept for a SF Romance that I dreamed up a while ago, wrote down, and promptly forgot, because DUDE I don’t have time to write ANOTHER book. But it will work for this exercise.

Jacob Enderman is a nineteen-year-old human genetically engineered from stolen DNA to be part of the advanced negotiating party for an alien race making contact with Earth for the first time. Only he’s never met his Makers – he’s been grown and trained for his duties on the dark side of the moon, waiting for the day of First Contact. Then he will meet his human liaison, and his mission is clear: to fall in love; to mate; and to pave the way. If he and his fellow negotiators fail to make that lasting connection, the human race will lose their chance to be elevated to a space-faring race. But what if gaining the trust of the humans is only the first step in a more insidious plan, as the humans will no doubt suspect? With a foot in both worlds, Jacob is a Stranger in a Strange Land… and has ideas of his own.

Okay, it doesn’t neatly answer the exact questions, but it has all the elements of the premise.

STEP 4

Now I want you to brainstorm cool situations that could arise from the tangled web you’ve weaved in your logline. Just write a single sentence or phrase to describe each possible “cool situation.” Write them quickly, don’t linger about getting the words right. I want you to generate 15-20 ideas. They do NOT have to make sense for your story. They can be wild and crazy. The wilder the better. This is just brainstorming.
If you get stuck…
  • Think of ways the setting can interfere with your character, keep her from reaching her goals
  • Think of new characters that can interfere
  • Keep going
  • Think of something that would break your story
  • Think of the worst possible thing that could happen to your character
  • Keep going
When you get to about 20 ideas, stop.
Off the top of my head…
  • Jacob fails in his training to master a basic human social skill
  • Jacob falls for one of his fellow negotiators
  • Jacob has to counsel the negotiator he loves to mate with her human liaison
  • Jacob and his negotiators are taken hostage by one of the human nations
  • The aliens make an unexpected live-communication with the negotiators across space
  • Jacob discovers where the aliens true homeworld is
  • Jacob’s liaison is beautiful but uninterested in him – and very suspicious
  • Jacob’s liaison kidnaps him away from the hostage-taking-human-nation; she thinks his life is in danger
  • Jacob wants to see the ocean (he’s only seen pictures); when he gets there, he has a spiritual moment, connecting him to humanity
  • Jacob sees the ugly underside of humanity through a terrorist character who kills one of the negotiators
  • Jacob discovers who his DNA was stolen from
  • Jacob has to kill someone to keep from being killed
  • Jacob discovers he’s not fully human
  • The aliens show up… and they’re not what we expect.
I’ll stop here, but I could go on all day with this premise. Seriously, there’s a lot there. If you’re finding you don’t have much to mine in your premise, dig harder to bring out the potential. It’s there. You just have to find it.

STEP 5

Put an asterisk (or highlight in some way) the scenes that are most INTENSE
  • Jacob fails in his training to master a basic human social skill
  • Jacob falls for one of his fellow negotiators
  • Jacob has to counsel the negotiator he loves to mate with her human liaison
  • Jacob and his negotiators are taken hostage by one of the human nations
  • The aliens make an unexpected live-communication with the negotiators across space
  • Jacob discovers where the aliens true homeworld is
  • Jacob’s liaison is beautiful but uninterested in him – and very suspicious
  • Jacob’s liaison kidnaps him away from the hostage-taking-human-nation; she thinks his life is in danger
  • Jacob wants to see the ocean (he’s only seen pictures); when he gets there, he has a spiritual moment, connecting him to humanity
  • Jacob sees the ugly underside of humanity through a terrorist character who kills one of the negotiators
  • Jacob discovers who his DNA was stolen from
  • Jacob has to kill someone to keep from being killed
  • Jacob discovers he’s not fully human
  • The aliens show up… and they’re not what we expect.

STEP 6 

Take those highlighted scenes and order the top five from most intense (1) to least intense (5).
  • 5 – Jacob has to counsel the negotiator he loves to mate with her human liaison
  • 5 – Jacob and his negotiators are taken hostage by one of the human nations
  • 4 – Jacob’s liaison kidnaps him away from the hostage-taking-human-nation; she thinks his life is in danger
  • 3 – Jacob wants to see the ocean (he’s only seen pictures); when he gets there, he has a spiritual moment, connecting him to humanity
  • 3 – Jacob sees the ugly underside of humanity through a terrorist character who kills one of the negotiators
  • 2 – Jacob has to kill someone to keep from being killed
  • 1 – The aliens show up… and they’re not what we expect.
I cheated because I wanted to keep both #5’s and #3’s in the process.

STEP 7

There are lots of ways to structure a story, but one way is to look at “Master Scenes” or turning points that have particularly strong intensity in driving the story. The five most intense scenes in your book should be (according to this structure):
  • Hook (introduction scene)
  • Point of No Return (break into Act II)
  • Midpoint (sneakily at the midpoint of your story)
  • Crisis (break into Act III)
  • Climax (the big finale)
The Climax should be your MOST INTENSE (1) scene in the book; the Hook should be your SECOND MOST INTENSE (2); the Midpoint is THIRD (3), and then the Point of No Return and Crisis can duke it out for fourth and fifth place.
Just for fun, line up the scenes you’ve picked out in order. See if it makes sense for the story.
  • HOOK – Jacob has to kill someone to keep from being killed
  • POINT OF NO RETURN – Jacob has to counsel the negotiator he loves to mate with her human liaison
  • POINT OF NO RETURN – Jacob and his negotiators are taken hostage by one of the human nations
  • MIDPOINT – Jacob sees the ugly underside of humanity through a terrorist character who kills one of the negotiators
  • MIDPOINT – Jacob wants to see the ocean (he’s only seen pictures); when he gets there, he has a spiritual moment, connecting him to humanity
  • CRISIS – Jacob’s liaison kidnaps him away from the hostage-taking-human-nation; she thinks his life is in danger
  • CLIMAX – The aliens show up… and they’re not what we expect.
Now you’re starting to have a story.
I like the “taken hostage” one better for the POINT OF NO RETURN, and both of the MIDPOINT scenes are perfect “mirror moments”, so I would probably combine those two into one terrific, high-energy scene. The HOOK is interesting – I imagined having Jacob possibly be forced into a kill-or-be-killed situation later in the story, but maybe I could work something for great HOOK scene, something symbolic early on of his “am I human or am I alien” struggle. Maybe something dramatic where he kills something non-sentient to keep his cover, so the humans don’t discover them quite yet… the point being that now I have all kinds of material to work with and the exercise is forcing me to think in new ways about the story.

Dang it, now I want to write this. (This is the danger of brainstorming, at least for me.)
If your scenes don’t quite fit, don’t worry – this is a starting point. You now have a bounty of ideas, a sense of how intense they are, whether you could make them more intense or not, and where in the basic framework of the story they should fit. When I first did this exercise, it was a revelation to me that the hook has to have a high intensity, to draw the reader in. Now I see it as an essential part of structuring the story.
Hopefully this exercise will spur you in the right direction for generating new ideas for your story and giving it a stronger framework.
Write on, my friends!

Susan Kaye Quinn is the author of the bestselling Mindjack Trilogy, which is young adult science fiction. Her latest release is Third Daughter (The Dharian Affairs #1) which is her excuse to dress up in corsets and fight with swords. She also has a dark-and-gritty SF serial called The Debt Collector and a middle grade fantasy called Faery Swap. It’s possible she’s easily distracted. She always has more speculative fiction fun in the works. You can find out what she’s up to by subscribing to her newsletter (hint: new subscribers get a free short story!) or by stopping by her blog (www.susankayequinn.com).